Photo Friday: Destruction
seething rain
by the distance i look over
from the other side of the sea i stare
awaiting for the rain's seethe
to cleanse my being, my soul,
to touch me and make me feel
to awaken this numbness in me.
as i see it coming
and i froze as i gleam,
locked in the trance of unknowing
spared from the adamant dullness
of the vast trenching sky -
wave down to move forward
stickled my glued feet together
to the green earth;
but somehow i still see
however i close my eyes
the devastation that i have left
still haunts my every glint -
now the clouds liquidifies
and so does my psyche;
as time has told me repeatedly
you are your own freedom,
you are your own wrath.
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note: this is my entry for
Photo taken at Dencio's Restaurant in Tagaytay, over-looking Taal Lake
18 Park your thoughts here:
Thanks for the comment. I appreciate it.
you're very much welcome 8) you do have that cool shot of that bike. and thank you too for droppin by..
pengeng talent...
lol 8)
but you know, you have a keen style of story telling that i admire..
Thanks for dropping by and commenting, I see that you're pretty fond of poetry yourself =) You draw well too!
whoa!!! i remember this pic.. i was there all amazed and stunned by the moment!!! ang galing nung rain no..first time ko makakita nito... i was so excited to tell baby kj bout this remember? awwww... (anonymous pa bako!?!?)
lostst.. thanks 8) some of my poems are not that deep tho.. but thanks for passin by too.
anonymous? hmm i know.. well your baby kj would be delighted to see this pic indeed. which reminds me, to send you your solo shot of "only missing is you" pose. ;p remember? hehe
'only missing is you' pic...waaahhh...i wonder how i look like...oh well... am a bit lost today...(for surr!) wasnt able to talk to him the other day before we all left the office and that makes me weak...sad!!!!! see yah...angel kawt!!
sending it now as of writing.. it was originally dark but altered it a bit. i send you both tho..
and as for talking to him.. mmm 'ts ok.. there is always monday.. im still wondering tho about what he told you.. "didnt knew he'd wait that long"? hmm...
been thinking about it too...big time... :(
ohh dont worry.. your time will come.. just dont stop dreaming..
oh for surr...i wont stop...id wait till my dreams become a reality...till we both finally find our way back home...
aww.. see.. mismo!
8D
oh..you saw his new picturrs? dang!!! love...love...love... thanks angel kawt...
where? on his blog? hmm.. i have yet to see.. haa.. kilig naman ang iba dyan! *winks
oh no...not there..it's actually all over my station... :)haaayyy.... he's everywhere!!!
HA! parang chat lang ah! ..well yeah he looks great there.. you look good together! erm.. hihi
btw thanks for the sms.. i read it.. thank you talaga! you're my mentor..
ok...i gathered enough strength to finally...finally say this... 'the end' of the story...this is where it should ends...hope we could still be friends though...i am lost!!!!
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