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Saturday, October 14, 2006

Photo Friday: Destruction

seething rain

by the distance i look over
from the other side of the sea i stare
awaiting for the rain's seethe
to cleanse my being, my soul,
to touch me and make me feel
to awaken this numbness in me.

as i see it coming
and i froze as i gleam,
locked in the trance of unknowing
spared from the adamant dullness
of the vast trenching sky -

wave down to move forward
stickled my glued feet together
to the green earth;
but somehow i still see
however i close my eyes
the devastation that i have left
still haunts my every glint -

now the clouds liquidifies
and so does my psyche;
as time has told me repeatedly
you are your own freedom,
you are your own wrath.

note: this is my entry for
Photo taken at Dencio's Restaurant in Tagaytay, over-looking Taal Lake


18 Park your thoughts here:

Anonymous Howard whispered...

Thanks for the comment. I appreciate it.

17/10/06 3:25 AM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

you're very much welcome 8) you do have that cool shot of that bike. and thank you too for droppin by..

18/10/06 7:54 AM  
Blogger sam whispered...

pengeng talent...

18/10/06 8:25 AM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

lol 8)

but you know, you have a keen style of story telling that i admire..

18/10/06 12:47 PM  
Blogger LostSt whispered...

Thanks for dropping by and commenting, I see that you're pretty fond of poetry yourself =) You draw well too!

18/10/06 7:27 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous whispered...

whoa!!! i remember this pic.. i was there all amazed and stunned by the moment!!! ang galing nung rain no..first time ko makakita nito... i was so excited to tell baby kj bout this remember? awwww... (anonymous pa bako!?!?)

19/10/06 3:11 AM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

lostst.. thanks 8) some of my poems are not that deep tho.. but thanks for passin by too.

anonymous? hmm i know.. well your baby kj would be delighted to see this pic indeed. which reminds me, to send you your solo shot of "only missing is you" pose. ;p remember? hehe

19/10/06 8:21 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous whispered...

'only missing is you' pic...waaahhh...i wonder how i look like...oh well... am a bit lost today...(for surr!) wasnt able to talk to him the other day before we all left the office and that makes me weak...sad!!!!! see yah...angel kawt!!

22/10/06 9:24 PM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

sending it now as of writing.. it was originally dark but altered it a bit. i send you both tho..

and as for talking to him.. mmm 'ts ok.. there is always monday.. im still wondering tho about what he told you.. "didnt knew he'd wait that long"? hmm...

23/10/06 8:41 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous whispered...

been thinking about it too...big time... :(

26/10/06 11:18 PM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

ohh dont worry.. your time will come.. just dont stop dreaming..

27/10/06 7:59 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous whispered...

oh for surr...i wont wait till my dreams become a reality...till we both finally find our way back home...

29/10/06 12:49 AM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

aww.. see.. mismo!

1/11/06 8:47 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous whispered... saw his new picturrs? dang!!! thanks angel kawt...

2/11/06 4:01 AM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

where? on his blog? hmm.. i have yet to see.. haa.. kilig naman ang iba dyan! *winks

3/11/06 10:03 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous whispered...

oh no...not's actually all over my station... :)haaayyy.... he's everywhere!!!

4/11/06 2:14 AM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

HA! parang chat lang ah! ..well yeah he looks great there.. you look good together! erm.. hihi

btw thanks for the sms.. i read it.. thank you talaga! you're my mentor..

4/11/06 1:36 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous whispered...

ok...i gathered enough strength to finally...finally say this... 'the end' of the story...this is where it should ends...hope we could still be friends though...i am lost!!!!

10/11/06 2:48 AM  

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