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Tuesday, September 26, 2006

B&W Challange: A look over your country

(Un regard sur votre pays)

losing sight of the sea

here i am strolling back to reality
back to where lost weeks have been
lost in the grasp of a continuality
holding on to my being

i should sleep to be able to wake up
to hear the thunders to my skin
whistling the echo
of a fast-paced dream

a film circling in my mind
flicks of memory glances of him
i feel the numbness of the air
as i swallow in deeply
tightening the grip
weakening my stand

i could almost touch
i could almost feel
i could almost taste
the bitter-sweet nuisance of the sea

drifting me afloat...

and until now
yes, until now,
letting me be.

note: Photo taken last August 20th at Subic Bay's Ocean Adventure Park, dubbed as "the first and only open water marine park in Southeast Asia".
This should have been for last week's topic: The Sea (la mer), but yeah, it still applies for this week's theme.


6 Park your thoughts here:

Anonymous Aristocrat whispered...

And I split the atom & parked my comment here

Just a very random thought.

28/9/06 4:06 PM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

haa! cool..

29/9/06 10:22 PM  
Anonymous Aristocrat whispered...

And thus he split it into quarters...

Still want to migrate to wordpress? It's free like Blogspot or Blogsome now. You can just export your old weblog over ;)

29/9/06 10:55 PM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

hmm.. really now? a year ago they werent open for free hosting. erm making some template experiments too.. i actually have a slight revamp of Outside the Box..

well if i have the time id try that! thanks for the tip!

30/9/06 2:53 PM  
Blogger Aravis whispered...

This is a gorgeous photo!

1/10/06 2:49 AM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

thanks! tho i had problems posting the link at the Black and White Challenge page.. it doesnt seem to show. hmm..

anyway, glad you passed by.. i wanted to tell you that your blog isnt showing at my browser, i only see the header. (IE is terrible! and my mozilla is down)

1/10/06 4:41 AM  

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