B&W Challange: Indoors (A l'intérieur)
Windy,
sun's up and not too hot,
I smell your freshly-washed clothes
as I lay on my back,
slowly shifting from side to side,
gazing into my empty wall with a smile,
looking outside the window with a sigh.
Days pass by so slow,
like time is crawling on the sea shore.
Low waves
touch and wash away
the sands between its feet,
standing still,
looking beyond…
I glued my thoughts to my pillow
as I unbury myself from misery.
I kneel on my bed
to look down my window.
A bear road opens up to me,
the quiet breeze;
the wind wrapping my cheeks
and as I close my eyes,
empty whispers
blowing my hair afloat,
I hold lightly
to the cold windowsill.
Consuming my thoughts,
I let the faint heat
unmelt the memories,
as I lay here,
just here,
wanting the moment;
absorbing it.
1930's blues on my radio.
Such a perfect lazy day for a Holiday.
But such a day
would have been real perfect
if only spent with you *.*
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note: This is for (updated now with a poem)
4 Park your thoughts here:
Reading this, I feel I am practically there with you...
So dreamy...
Wonderfully put together Velvet!
times like this when you really feel you are with someone whos not there...
hee, and thanks!
OOOh, can feel the light and shawdows in this piece and the words are tender and warm-just like that summer breeze.
hmm.. thanks! you have just brightened my day! 8)
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