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Wednesday, June 07, 2006

Photo Friday: New

opening a new world

my mind is set from out of focus
to a bright beam blurring my eyes
awaiting for it to touch my sight
damp in this cold dark night

i looked outside i see complete darkness
touching the glass pane of another world
an ever changing time
a place where my soul wandered

a spit spat on the glass
tapped the echo to my hand
it went on and continuously poured
but couldnt feel the wetness it soared

droplets smashed on the stonewalls
on the concrete road the rain sounded
like a thousand ivory balls
spinning in a thousand roulettes

i can smell the bitter taste of leaves now
as rainwater seeps through the seams
of the window in front of me
i see my reflection finally stopped crying

as sudden as it came -

the chaos of the night was cracked open
as the faintest softest glimmerings of light
showed across the horizon
slowly peeking into the world
slowly unwrapping a new dimension

now im here to unlock the window
to be able to pass through…

note: my contribution for Photo Friday.. for this moogie day..


10 Park your thoughts here:

Blogger Ambres whispered...

Honey! I really like this poem.. such nice imagines, love the part of the rain sounding *like a thousand ivory balls spinning in a thousand roulettes* and the meaning of it(?) and much more.

And what a beautiful picture.

mmmm cant wait till i see!

kisssssssss on this Moogie day!

7/6/06 7:18 AM  
Blogger Aravis whispered...

This is so beautiful! It refreshes, renews, just to look at it.

The poem matches it well, and is so wonderfully descriptive that I feel as though I can smell and taste the world you depict.

7/6/06 2:29 PM  
Anonymous Deity in behalf of Chaos whispered...

Yesterday, I bought some books for my students and passed by on-going exhibit of "Poems and Paints". The painters chose their favorite old English poetries and painted their interpretation of the said poem.

Then I thought of you, how you charmingly combine art and poetry, which is really great.

If in the future your works make it to any well-known museums, do I get a piece for free? Hehehe!!!

8/6/06 1:37 AM  
Blogger floots whispered...

rain roulette and fiery light
beautiful combination
thank you

11/6/06 4:26 PM  
Blogger dreaming-neko whispered...

how's it going, velvet? :)

20/6/06 10:55 AM  
Anonymous deity whispered...

helloooo velvet!!! i just had finished nagging x. heheheh... and thought i should give you an earful too but the poem mesmerized me.

i can only doodle with words. sigh...

i miss the skyline of makati, of ortigas, of manila...

i miss home...

21/6/06 1:49 AM  
Anonymous AnonyGhost whispered...

OOooohhh ...

21/6/06 2:22 PM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

Ambres.. thanks sweetie! that's a pic of a window i see everyday.. and mmm imagine rain sounding like that.. the hypnotic noise...

and yeah you shall see it soon indeed.. *.*

Aravis.. recently been busy with my walking life.. and tho i have less time online.. i am anticipating a much greater renewal.. a wider horizon as i would say.. thanks for the comment and glad you like it!

Deity in behalf of Chaos.. gee.. (now im at a loss for words) you're making me blush.. hee!

a piece for free? of course! why not?!

22/6/06 4:02 PM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

floots.. well thank you too! great poets like you inspire me to continue writing..

dreaming-neko.. busy! busy! tsk.. but im havin fun too.. tho my blogs dont reflect much of it.. id try to spare some time his weekend..

i hope!

deity.. nagging x? lol! why? ok i go see.. havent been blog hopping for weeks! did i miss something?

and yeah.. the skyline and cityscape here wont be found anywhere else in the world! 8D

AnonyGhost.. Anon!!! you're alive!! ohh.. haunting... how are you?

22/6/06 4:04 PM  
Blogger Anonymous whispered...

Ooooooohhhhh .... (can't say surviving) Been visiting old haunts };-}

22/6/06 7:25 PM  

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