Illo Friday: Metropolitan
Places To Go
lost among the shadows of crowded thoughts
how would i normalize my breathing
when all the beats are gone
when your silhouette have decided to sleep
when my crumpled dreams left me alone?
how will i travel
when i cant walk about
when i cant go beyond
and i cant see much further
where is your shadow?
please hover over me
as we dance above your waterfall...
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note: i dunno if this will pass at illo friday tho.. but the places seen here are just significant for me. Please click pic for better view.
atomicvelvetsigh consumed the twilight @ 6:32 AM
17 Park your thoughts here:
nice illustration and great poetry!
This enjoyable image is easily Metropolitan. I enjoy reading the poetry along with the image.
Beautiful interaction of the images with the text.
Very original!
mm thanks everyone 8D im going thru all of your illos as well..
and actually, this is a mixture of places that i would like to go to... in this lifetime. it may have familiar landmarks to some *.*
I love the way you blended the colors. Is that Mayon Volcano in the upper left? Teehee.. I have poor set of eyes.
I think the way you balanced the collage of different images with colors is great. I also really like the poem attached to it. I think this will definitely do more than "pass" at illo fridays.
More perfect poetry to compliment another terrific image. You know how much I love collage...this one is delicious!
wow it is a very special piece of work, Excellent work!
Love the poem/collage combo. Wish I could see it full-screen. Is that possible?
I really liked the collage images coupled with the poem. Wonderful!
knottydon... well, its not mayon volcano.. actually, its phiopappos hill in athens. one of the places i wish to go to one day.
sA, mick, bubi, aravisarwen... thanks! nice to know you like it too.. and the colors i used may have meaning on some as well as the texture and hidden images. haa. hard to dechiper some key points tho. 8)
floots... thanks and well.. i could send you a bigger pic.. if i can crop it better tho you get the full size of what i made when you click the image.
This is so nice and cool! Ur poetry is always beauty and moving, thank u so much =)
Bana
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nawalan na ng sasay ???
words fade but the memories are still vivid of places .. people ... moments... time has left ... nice art
anung medium mo dito?
thanks for sharing your interpretation.. actually that is exactly how i felt.
the medium? this is a collage done with MS Paint and color enhancement with picassa.
I'm really pleased you pulled my attention back to your site; I especially liked your metropolitan illustrations.
oh hi connie! this is a very old post but i like it still.. funny now that i look at it i see some places i have been and never would have thought id actually go to when i made this piece.. i was just dreaming then..
8)
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