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Sunday, July 03, 2005

Illo Friday: Sport

Below the Stars

battle over seas

first move: white

peaceful evening
little birds singing
middle of ploughed
desolated mudfield

i see..
plants start to appear again
nature smiles
at everything.

second move: black

nature smiles indeed
as she sees
Our Love
thus -
making birds sing
the sweetest song
letting the flowers bloom..

even at night.

third move: white

blue skies
feather shaped clouds
dreaming away
with the handgliders
i see

fourth move: black

the horizon
hides you in vein
through cold things
cross the sea
towards you
as the biggest stars
look above us.

fifth move: white

warm summer night
fading light
purple blue
with the opposite
a bright halfmoon
at one far away star.

sixth move: black

sprinkled love
and sleepy dust
on me
dreamt of the sea..

seventh move: white

i'm diving in now
in the faint sweet flavor
of a nearby tree
through my window
and thoughts of you.

of your smile..
which paint
the brightest star.

draw.. life is neither black nor white.

note: my week's entry for illustration friday, pls. click picture for better view.

9 Park your thoughts here:

Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

ohh.. sorry entry number 72 at illo friday is no longer working. 8)

3/7/05 12:00 PM  
Blogger Anonymous whispered...

Very creative, beautiful poetry and love the sport of chess :)

3/7/05 9:06 PM  
Blogger Bana Palomitaz whispered...

Ur link is broken or smth? anyways, i like so much ur illo, its touching and so beauty ^^

4/7/05 12:59 AM  
Blogger Mick whispered...

I love the angularity of the drawing - but, the poem? I wipe away a tear as I tell you this: "I love it. It makes the illustration, of that be certain". What a wonderful, apparently, you have won!

4/7/05 2:48 AM  
Blogger isay whispered...

illustration and poetry-lovely combination! nice of you to leave a comment in my blog. i am glad to have found you, too. those deleted comments are not really that bad but i will not forget my mistake!
best regards

4/7/05 2:17 PM  
Blogger floots whispered...

great idea beautifully executed. cheers

5/7/05 12:06 AM  
Blogger bobi whispered...

Hello ! I don't understand everything because ma english is very very good but it's mean you are an allustrator and a poete too !

5/7/05 10:09 PM  
Anonymous jake whispered...

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11/1/06 10:19 AM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

thanks everyone for your nice comments.. just glanced back to this post coz of a spam... but its great to read you all again.. 8)

11/1/06 7:23 PM  

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