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Tuesday, June 28, 2005

torture

and the thunders roll under my feet
the ground jolted as the sky
trembled in deceit

and as lightnings toil the heavens
a hundred years of pent up tears
now drained and washed
  down everything...

i just wasn’t made for this time

the noise bleed into words
and the hungry tongue tortures
the silent scream with prejudice
grumble echoes through the horizon's fleet
disintegrate into warm breeze
a gut-perspiring beat

as the thoughts overlap
with unpatterned rhythm
and mind piercing with each mussing

the thumping of the noise
now continue to sting
and continue to irritate
oh, how much torture can one take?

5 Park your thoughts here:

Blogger jane whispered...

great graphics. your blog is amazing, but way above my head. keep on keepin on.

28/6/05 5:12 PM  
Anonymous Porkchop Miyer whispered...

nice blog. nice to see another blog from the Philippines. by the way, i came in from blogexplosion. :)

29/6/05 7:04 PM  
Blogger LadyWhiteSpirit whispered...

awesome :)bravo *clap*clap*clap

30/6/05 12:29 AM  
Blogger LadyWhiteSpirit whispered...

nasa bakasyon pa kami..sa july 9 pa balik ko sa pagba blog..hehehehe

musta na u?

:)

30/6/05 12:29 AM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

jane.. thanks, and you've got an interesting blog as well 8)

miyer.. oh yeah i remember you on BE. and it seems the Ph is among the top10 countries with the most blogs registered there, although only a number pass by the shoutbox or leave comments when surfing.

ladywhite... miss you sis! thanks *bow* hehe. eto medyo busy.. balik school eh. esp next week ciguro. anyway just info me pag tapos ka na sa music meme 8D

3/7/05 7:39 PM  

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