invisible steps
silence around me
but chaos in my head
my thoughts are running
a hundread miles in a second.
then a crash passed by
growling hissing metal
swishing, flattening the sky
leaving marks of stray bullets behind.
the stillness was broke
a slight spank fom the cold
chime drops tinkering
then back to quiet it seem.
hours gone endless
my mind walked to cairo and back
forcing myself to move
but my being stayed aback.
now the echo from across lands
whispers carried by the wind
above me was scorching
beyond me was heat.
where is my senses taking me?
a flat coast and desert maybe
a million faces leaving
their shadows dissolve to nothing.
the pervading medley of my repose
i relish with anxiety
whats beyond these brick walls
whats beyond these mediocrity
will you take me away
from this toruosity?
my inane impulse -
now numb.
now slits.
now rubbles.
5 Park your thoughts here:
wow ang ganda!waaaaa gusto ko itagalog etong poem mo na eto kakayanin ko kaya?*winks*
waaaaaaaa pilipit ang pagsasalin ko sa tagalog....magpasensyahan na lang tayo kung ano kahihinatnan!hehehe magtlagay ka naman ng tagboard mo.
http://cbox.co.za/ yan dyan ka sign up ng tagboard magada dyan pwede ka maglagay sariling smilies at kita mo bawat ip's.naisalin ko na rin etong tula at kinopya ko din pic mo d2 sa tula.....noong ginagawa ko yung tula napaiyak ako.....waaaa di ko akalain na ganun pala gumawa ng tula!at iba ang pagkakaintindi ko sa tula na nagawa mo...yun na yon..sensya na sa nakayanan ko ha....*singhot*
Ohh.. lws... your version is just plain wonderful! beautifully done...
to everyone who liked this piece, please read bakas na di nakikita, and find your own thoughts within the poem.. hmm hope we hear more feedback 8)
eyyy aga mo naman magising ?
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