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Wednesday, June 22, 2005


wading my feet thru water
burried a second in wet land
i looked down and saw -
we are but grains of sand
washed among a desert of waves
the heat burning and melting
each salty vignette.

the monotonous journey
of every new day

ends up in a beauty
cast down the unawake
vessels of the clouds
sail to the northwind's dictate
tossing down shadows
and colors with no name

one day a reflection shimmered
to the corner of my eye
it was you in a disguise
of a fibble light

we swim in a galaxy of endless passersby
and every turn of the wave
you flung closer by
the indulgent sun is out again
revoyaging the plumblessness of the sky

i see you looking up in pain
i see you in the infinte pattern
each star you reflected
each star sweeps thru your breath
and like wind blowing through my face
your shadow kiss my tears away

we are confined to the ideas of mankind
by the border of conventional laws we bind
what is really in me,
what is really in you?
im all here waiting for the waves to continue

before the last wave will fade
before the last turn disintigrate
only two pairs of eyes left hovered
would these pairs find each other?

and i drown myself in wonder
coz we are but a grain of sand
in the coastline of the world.

je bent zover weg.. maar ook zo dichtbij mijn hart

note: background music while writing Cranes - "Flute Song"

5 Park your thoughts here:

Blogger GaelicGrl whispered...

Hi -

Just thought I'd let you know that I stopped by and that I'm enjoying your blog!

Thanks for stopping by mine.


22/6/05 11:52 AM  
Blogger jenn see whispered...

the ocean has away of bringing out the infinite in us all.

thanks for the link, by the by.
kudos on your elaborate blog.

23/6/05 4:19 AM  
Blogger Indeterminacy whispered...

Your blog is so damn cool, I added a link to it. Anyone who writes poetry and likes the Velvet Underground is OK in my book.

23/6/05 9:10 PM  
Blogger RagDoll whispered...

My new favorite bit of writing by you!

(Just in case you are interested, I added a new chapter to 'Last Request'.)

25/6/05 3:00 AM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

gaelicgrl... nice you like my blog too, im still to answer your book meme tho. 8) maybe this week. ive been pretty busy, and writing would def ease out some tension.

jenn see... i always see the ocean as a symbol of limitless possibilities. and your link is among the first ones i have (as i can remember) 8)

indererminacy... thanks. and ive always voted for your blog at BE.. hehe. and indeed, they are my fave band of all time, hence my name. 8)

and ragdoll... thanks sweetie. and im gonna read your "chapter 2" now. 8D

27/6/05 6:07 AM  

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