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Monday, March 13, 2006

Photo Friday: Red


You walk by the distance
i stare as you pass by, in my seat,
just holding your memory instead,
in my sight, in my spirit, in my head.
your shadow moving, i glimpse
but what i saw are only remnants
of you being there, being here.
and you'd remain only in my mind's eye
as i consume the fire of you
and the distance remained cruel
and the fates remained waiting
can't move the oceans
to cut the distance yet
can't make the sky fall
to shorten time yet
can't pass through this mirror to
come to you or you here
no, not yet.

I'm looking at an empty chair
infront of me. a coffee for two
but only without you.
i look at the sun rise
while you see it set.
it blurs the lines of reason
it feeds the chains of time
as the lone and level sands stretch as far
and by this distance
the ache for you remain
remain to only ache, incessantly.
please hold my hand as i fly
and float in our dreamland
make it true, make it real,
longing for you.. only you.

note: "Red Cafe" photo taken last December,2005, my entry for this week's Photofriday


14 Park your thoughts here:

Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

oops.. hope its ok i post this poem.. i formerly told someone its exclusive *.* heee kisss

13/3/06 10:21 PM  
Blogger dreaming-neko whispered...

i like this one :)
lonely people can relate with 'longing...'

14/3/06 9:25 AM  
Blogger Rey whispered...

for me nothing stirs imagination more when you're lonely and sad.

14/3/06 7:02 PM  
Blogger floots whispered...

a powerful plea
(like the pic too)

15/3/06 3:59 AM  
Blogger Renu whispered...

Beautiful..:)glad i stumbled on ur blog,enjoyed being here.

15/3/06 2:57 PM  
Blogger Aristocrat whispered...

Haha, must be your Significant Other eh?

I like the photo, very sensual..

16/3/06 5:14 PM  
Anonymous aynaku whispered...

good writing as usual and nice RED lokks like a Makati-style place which I missed

19/3/06 6:11 PM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

dreaming-neko.. loneliness is a sickness, and once you have it, sometimes it takes long to heal, sometimes the only cure, you can't get hold of...

Rey villegas.. i agree with that completely. and the deepest emotions influences art.

floots.. *sigh* too bad not all pleas are granted soon as we want to

renu.. thanks! and you're welcome to drop by and stay anytime. 8)

aristocrat.. hmm.. is it? but thanks, glad you like it.

aynaku.. thanks.. its one of those coffee/pizza shops at night, tho not in makati.. i can still smell capuccino in the air while writing these and glancing at this pic.

20/3/06 4:12 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous whispered...

Wow this is great! So you do have hidden talents! Now I'm intrigued to see what's hidden in this blog!

23/3/06 5:16 AM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

hmm... and who are you? you've got me intrigued too...

24/3/06 6:51 AM  
Blogger Eu-Leh whispered...

hi, interesting and informative posts! i'm bloghopping and just checking your blogsite. Keep the blogs rolling!

25/3/06 11:46 PM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

hmm.. basing on your profile pic i know you're a pinoy! 8) thanks for hopping by..

26/3/06 1:49 AM  
Blogger Rrramone whispered...

AVS, thanks for the comment on camera tossing. Love this RED piece. Just joined photo friday today!! Looking forward to it.

26/3/06 12:24 PM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

ohh.. which reminds me.. have to post my entry for this week too! too bad tho i missed posting my "technology" photo. been so busy this week! tssk..

27/3/06 3:33 AM  

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