Illo Friday: Sea...
..in deep blue sky
by the sea
you catch me
your arms of waves
carry me
by the sea
i get drowned
your wide trenches
dreams fall real
mirrored thoughts
like the sea
in deep blue sky
as we float...
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note: i just came home from a week vacation, so i wasnt able to post this illo on time. nonetheless, i still submitted this for this is actually a gift for last Moogie *.* Seventh..
atomicvelvetsigh consumed the twilight @ 11:53 PM
6 Park your thoughts here:
Thats so Sweet of You! Love the colours of the pic and
"your arms of waves carry me" too in Love..
kissssssssss *.*
mmmmmmm *.*
Your sea is shimmery!!!
i just luv blending the spray paint at mspaint.. heee making another one for this week's theme now. 8)
A wonderful poem. It flows wonderfully when I recite it, but comes the second last line, I sort of stumbled. The sounds seem to be a trifle wrong lol...
Anyways my dear, thanks for dropping by. I'm kept busy with the re-opening of the semester and all my psychic energy is being channelled elsewhere at the moment. Take care!
thanks.. and ha! eh that second last line is intended to stand out of the rest of the poem. hmm and there's a reason why 8)
busy days here too.. i fear i would be leser online next week even, but hey... hmm we never know.
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