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Friday, January 13, 2006

Illo Friday: Sea... deep blue sky

by the sea
you catch me
your arms of waves
carry me

by the sea
i get drowned
your wide trenches
dreams fall real

mirrored thoughts
like the sea
in deep blue sky
as we float...

note: i just came home from a week vacation, so i wasnt able to post this illo on time. nonetheless, i still submitted this for this is actually a gift for last Moogie *.* Seventh..


6 Park your thoughts here:

Blogger Ambres whispered...

Thats so Sweet of You! Love the colours of the pic and
"your arms of waves carry me" too in Love..

kissssssssss *.*

14/1/06 3:14 AM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

mmmmmmm *.*

14/1/06 4:00 AM  
Blogger Anonymous whispered...

Your sea is shimmery!!!

14/1/06 10:36 AM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

i just luv blending the spray paint at mspaint.. heee making another one for this week's theme now. 8)

15/1/06 10:50 AM  
Blogger Aristocrat whispered...

A wonderful poem. It flows wonderfully when I recite it, but comes the second last line, I sort of stumbled. The sounds seem to be a trifle wrong lol...

Anyways my dear, thanks for dropping by. I'm kept busy with the re-opening of the semester and all my psychic energy is being channelled elsewhere at the moment. Take care!

18/1/06 3:21 AM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

thanks.. and ha! eh that second last line is intended to stand out of the rest of the poem. hmm and there's a reason why 8)

busy days here too.. i fear i would be leser online next week even, but hey... hmm we never know.

18/1/06 4:26 AM  

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