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Friday, April 22, 2005

Night Light

night light
i beam
i stare
as i move about
one step
from yet another
counting all the pines
counting all the signs
in an aviary of shadows
a burst of stars
the crash of waves
the fading sun
a warrior going down
now all spirits take flight
and wander through the night

night lights
i hover
i spare
a second gone with you
the silk of your blanket
i wrap me with stars
as the wind flew about
another moondust
another dawn's dusk
through rooftops
i look down
and how your brilliance
above everything else...
above everything.

note: set the mood with *Death in Vegas - "Girls" (from lost in translation soundtrack)

11 Park your thoughts here:

Blogger floots whispered...

"aviary of shadows" - I love that.

23/4/05 4:58 PM  
Anonymous Tony whispered...

Death in Vegas is a great group. Sometimes I feel like I'm the only one that listens to them, let alone bought their CD lol

24/4/05 2:14 AM  
Blogger Billy whispered...

cool blog

24/4/05 2:43 AM  
Blogger Jessica whispered...

I agree with floots...great imagery.

24/4/05 5:51 AM  
Blogger dreaming-neko whispered...

very nice~
am going to check out some night lights myself :)

24/4/05 5:34 PM  
Blogger Pikkel Weezel whispered...

Thats was almost as awful as your background.

25/4/05 10:08 AM  
Blogger Pikkel Weezel whispered...

And stop with the LOL, it hasn't been cool in 5 years.

25/4/05 10:08 AM  
Anonymous pheqpheqta whispered...

hey, i finally visited your blog. my surfing time is unfortunately limited to someone's lunch break so i can't read everything but i do love the visuals.

25/4/05 1:53 PM  
Blogger freedom pad 'zine whispered...

she would probably stop with the LOL if you would start correcting your grammar.

27/4/05 2:27 AM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...


27/4/05 4:29 AM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

floots, billy, jessica, pheqpheqta - thanks. coz this is one of my fave poems i have written so far.

dreaming neko - hope you find your night light 8)

weezel and freedom pad - sorry, i just have to laugh at this. LOL!

7/5/05 4:41 AM  

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