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Thursday, February 08, 2007

Illo Friday: Sprout

She shot him down

she wakes up with the sun beaming to her eye
a heat cluttered stuck to her brain
spinning her head to unmemory
brink of blindness unsustained

digging back from her yesterday
forcing to remember what words were said
still nothing - as far as she can see
from the ten thousand scenes that twisted

a sudden spring of image clicked to her
from going back and forth and rewind
a shadow that made her laugh but not smile
is this the one?

she didn’t care where he’s been
and don’t care what he plans to do
a fool’s numbness sprouted and lingered
as they both let the day pass too

she waited for that moment that never came
and all her patience came burning
so time has sent the signal to halt
and she knows he always had it coming..

note: Oh, was i listening too much to Stone Roses or not? lol..
a poem to pay tribute to Feb 2nd.. and the camera painting entry for illo friday..


12 Park your thoughts here:

Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

apologies for the repost of entry from my other blog (for those who have seen it and didn't comment)

.. i finally updated to the new blogger and created a gmail account just for this. strangely, others are allowed to open their blogger without the update and mine requires me to. pfew.. now to do something about my long-delayed hellcat posty.. hope i wont wake up with a dead rat on my doorstep..

8/2/07 9:11 AM  
Anonymous shanie whispered...

Oh you have a another webpage? I think I know who you are dedicating this poem to.

8/2/07 9:14 AM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

lol shane that was fast.. oh lol you're just beside me.. silly.. hehe..

8/2/07 9:25 AM  
Blogger Hellcat whispered...

*dead rat on doorstep*

In regards to your poem Good On Herrrrr! If February 2nd was inappropriate for the comment ... Hellcat IS always improper} ;-}

8/2/07 5:19 PM  
Blogger carla whispered...

What a scintillating image!

9/2/07 2:06 AM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

Hellcat.. bwahaha feb 2 IS hellish..

and im still cleaning the rat's bloodstain on my "welcome" doormat.. };-}

carla.. it is brilliantly clever how such a device can produce an image from a limited available light! and i confess i am quite addicted into making these light paintings..

10/2/07 12:12 AM  
Blogger floots whispered...

"a fool's numbness" - hmm had my share of that
like this one
says much about relationships
love the pic too
makes me thinks of comets and barley
(maybe i need to get out more) :)

10/2/07 4:40 AM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

well we all have our share of foolish ways.. unavoidable or not.. just nice that at one time it may come it also passes..


i do need to get out too lol im burried in work here..

10/2/07 7:43 AM  
Blogger Annalee Blysse whispered...

Love the image.

13/2/07 8:27 AM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

thanks 8)

14/2/07 11:21 PM  
Blogger steve whispered...

Stone Roses--wicked! You've got some great taste in tunes. great art to boot from you--keep it up!

7/3/07 8:37 AM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

thanks! and oh i think music has a BIG influence in the way i express myself too..

thanks for droppin by..

7/3/07 10:55 PM  

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