Illo Friday: Sprout
She shot him down
she wakes up with the sun beaming to her eye
a heat cluttered stuck to her brain
spinning her head to unmemory
brink of blindness unsustained
digging back from her yesterday
forcing to remember what words were said
still nothing - as far as she can see
from the ten thousand scenes that twisted
a sudden spring of image clicked to her
from going back and forth and rewind
a shadow that made her laugh but not smile
is this the one?
she didn’t care where he’s been
and don’t care what he plans to do
a fool’s numbness sprouted and lingered
as they both let the day pass too
she waited for that moment that never came
and all her patience came burning
so time has sent the signal to halt
and she knows he always had it coming..
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note: Oh, was i listening too much to Stone Roses or not? lol..
a poem to pay tribute to Feb 2nd.. and the camera painting entry for illo friday..
atomicvelvetsigh consumed the twilight @ 8:56 AM
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apologies for the repost of entry from my other blog (for those who have seen it and didn't comment)
.. i finally updated to the new blogger and created a gmail account just for this. strangely, others are allowed to open their blogger without the update and mine requires me to. pfew.. now to do something about my long-delayed hellcat posty.. hope i wont wake up with a dead rat on my doorstep..
Oh you have a another webpage? I think I know who you are dedicating this poem to.
lol shane that was fast.. oh lol you're just beside me.. silly.. hehe..
*dead rat on doorstep*
In regards to your poem Good On Herrrrr! If February 2nd was inappropriate for the comment ... Hellcat IS always improper} ;-}
What a scintillating image!
Hellcat.. bwahaha feb 2 IS hellish..
and im still cleaning the rat's bloodstain on my "welcome" doormat.. };-}
carla.. it is brilliantly clever how such a device can produce an image from a limited available light! and i confess i am quite addicted into making these light paintings..
"a fool's numbness" - hmm had my share of that
like this one
says much about relationships
love the pic too
makes me thinks of comets and barley
(maybe i need to get out more) :)
cheers
well we all have our share of foolish ways.. unavoidable or not.. just nice that at one time it may come it also passes..
*cheers*
i do need to get out too lol im burried in work here..
Love the image.
thanks 8)
Stone Roses--wicked! You've got some great taste in tunes. great art to boot from you--keep it up!
thanks! and oh i think music has a BIG influence in the way i express myself too..
thanks for droppin by..
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