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Thursday, January 25, 2007

Lens Day Challenge: Peaceful

waiting for the sun to set

in the stillness of the moment
his brightness radiate by the distance
one of those gleams of genial fire
that darted across all oceans

from a standpoint of her dillydally life
whom was once aquainted only
with the grey twilight
now saw that there is more truth
to admit than be inclined

so unlike the calm lake,
she danced and sparkled and prattled
in a no nonsense senibility
awaiting his fire to come closer-
gaining the shadow of his presence
in a forbidden proximity

and wraped in the blinding light they float
slowly burning the velvet horizon
with the scene of life
that passes before the eye

they create, destroy and restore
over and over and over
and as they let go of their last breath,
a final etch painted across the sky..

that their passion shall burn forever.

note: this is a photo for those who miss Tagaytay.
although as for my poem, i think i need a more dramatic image..
bite me };-}


10 Park your thoughts here:

Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

actually.. waiting for July *.* or so.. hmm.. 8D

25/1/07 6:07 PM  
Blogger Hellcat whispered...


Isay will love it };-}

26/1/07 11:17 AM  
Blogger isay whispered...

"and wraped in the binding light they float" nice one!

helicat it is true i love it!

going somewhere in July?

26/1/07 8:25 PM  
Anonymous Aristocrat whispered...

Lovely photograph's not dramatic but it IS something else...

26/1/07 9:53 PM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

hellcat.. peace.. passion.. ppppppp.. there is something with this letter.. hmm... *.*

isay.. yeah i knew you'd love it! hmm.. in july? maybe.. let's see.. heee

aristocrat.. ohh i agree.. there IS something with this view..


26/1/07 10:52 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous whispered...

how about laguna?!

27/1/07 2:48 AM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

ohh i would luv to post a laguna pic as well.. esp from that great weekend we had (with my colleagues) *wink

27/1/07 9:13 AM  
Anonymous james whispered...

When will you do an illustration for Illustration Friday again?

28/1/07 11:50 AM  
Anonymous deity whispered...

i miss tagaytay. i miss the quiet dinner in dencio's. i miss the horse ride in picnic grove. can't wait to get home and see tagaytay again.

28/1/07 2:14 PM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

james.. thanks for asking.. i have an illo up now 8)

diety.. ohh yeah! those are the best places to go to at Tagaytay.. and dont forget the hefty meal they have at Leslie's..

you should bring chaos there..

29/1/07 9:02 AM  

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