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Thursday, October 13, 2005

Illo Friday: Lost

Lost Signs



No Raindrops

seduced by moonlight
silence decided to declare itself
should i not feel lost?
i cannot breathe
i cannot sleep
i cannot weep

dream away in the fire in your eyes
wrapped in the cold with you
melt with the breath of your mind
should i summarize
should i be surreal
should we blissfuly feel?

waiting for the caress of twilight
confined in the grasp of knowing
darkness is my knight
will you save me
will you stay
will you go away?

unstopped, unseen, no periphery
radiating embrace of what we seem
connected by a dream
just you and me
and a hundread
and a thousand
and a hundread more
of you and me...


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note: busy week.. have no time for a new poem and been working on this illo only during break times. im not sure if i posted the poem before tho.

12 Park your thoughts here:

Blogger Anonymous whispered...

This reminds me of movie 'signs' and crop circles and the 'unknown'! It's quite hypnotising being swirled into your green center, which is also like a shadow from a star! I like this one!!

13/10/05 5:47 PM  
Blogger Lisa whispered...

Wow, I love that sky. What a great take on lost!

13/10/05 9:48 PM  
Blogger Jaimie whispered...

I thought of crop circles too. The sky is great, almost eerie.

14/10/05 12:01 AM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

ohh sorry havent posted the poem earlier tho..

anonymous, jaimie.. yeah im as well drawn to the mystery of the crop circles since i was a kid...

lisa.. thanks! 8)

14/10/05 6:26 AM  
Blogger Aravis whispered...

It's the sky in this one that really draws me. I feel as though I could sit in that crop circle and watch the sky forever. *G*

14/10/05 6:47 AM  
Anonymous odilia whispered...

wow..wow and woww..
fantastic you site!!

:)

thank you for the comment on

I N S P I R A T I O N..

15/10/05 5:02 AM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

aravis.. lol! well, there's an extra seat here 8) and if you look closely, the sky has 2 planets here...

odilia.. gee thanks, and also for droppin by. Your photoblog is amazing!! just wish i could read italian poems too 8)

15/10/05 6:03 AM  
Blogger RagDoll whispered...

WOW~ I have been offline for a while, and came back to this beautiful piece!

15/10/05 4:08 PM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

ooohh!! ragdoll!! great to hear from you again.. i've not been posting as often as i wanted to, tho. but ive read your updates to your novel. i really believe you have something great instore.. so hmm.. kinda inspired me try out NaNoWriMo.. tho i think 50,000 in a month is quite impossible coz of my sked.

thanks again for droppin by 8)

16/10/05 2:06 AM  
Blogger easywriter whispered...

This is beautiful work (poem) and I love the image you used. Lost signs, says a great deal. Things gone missing in the mist.

16/10/05 3:23 AM  
Blogger Billy whispered...

this is the reason we survive in our artistic places

22/10/05 6:51 PM  
Blogger atomicvelvetsigh whispered...

easywriter, billy.. indeed we get inspired by lost signs, lost emotions, lost time..

27/10/05 1:09 AM  

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