Illo Friday: Float
Space Tranced
Capsules of time
burried through thunderbolts
as the jealous sun loom over us
in the distance i hear
chilled by the racing clouds
my damp window
moistened by the whisp of the sky
and i hear them now crashing
wild cries of the wind
and the rooftops a'wailing
wanting to break away
set free and fly
the sun now runs hiding
as big blocks come as a surprise
rolling over
in the nimbus of his eyes
we lay there be-stilled
comouflaged on the ground
beneath the swishing
and growling
and spins
we remain entangled;
entwined.
holding on -
to your invisible hand
as the wind carries us away
in circles we go
losing our grip we fly
will we ever land
on the same ground?
i dont know.
let the air separate
let the sun dictate
as we now both float and wait...
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note: Poem made Sept.10, Illo made December 2004, but i guess it suits this week's topic at
atomicvelvetsigh consumed the twilight @ 7:17 AM
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I can really relate your image to poem :)
it amazes me how you can put words together to make a beautiful poem.
anonymous, isay.. deeply appreciate your comments. tho i feel this is a lousy illo for this week, just dont have time to make a new one, ive been too busy. and this is a timely theme for that poem so i just had the feeling i should post it 8)
I'm happy that you did post it. Beautiful image portrayed through your words.
The spiralling words really add a lot to this - they took me completely by surprise!
poem's great
i especially love this part
"my damp window
moistened by the whisp of the sky"
Beautiful beginning,
"Capsules of time
burried through thunderbolts
as the jealous sun loom over us"
the nimbus of his eyes - a beautiful image
thank you
This illo is really funky and different. I like that.
There's such powerful imagery in your poetry, and this is no exception. You're adept at painting pictures with your words as well as with your hands.
easywriter.. thanks glad you like it 8) tho i think i really should use my PS soon.
ian.. hmm nice to hear that. your comment surprised me too..
ag, . : a : ., floots.. thanks for dropping by and choosing your fave lines.. and the meaning behind those lines probably leaves some kind of effect to each of us 8)
aravis.. hmm.. funky.. never thought of that.. thank you for the complement 8) well i always have a music running on the background while doing the illos.. maybe music somehow influences where the mind would soar.
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