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Friday, December 03, 2004


Late night thinking
In the darkness I crawl
Space enveloped my soul
Without a hum;
An unsounded utter.
I recite the pretense
In straight lines.
The shadow covering my sight

Swallows every word.
Naïve convention of thoughts
Yet earnestly spoken,
Spontaneously earned.
Mystified shadow,

I’m bewildered by thy words
Your mind transcends all knowing.
Liberate my thoughts from being
Locked up and drowning.
Feared yet fancied

Contrived yet undoubted
Guilty weaknesses…
You have touched my soul;
And captured my essence.
My relentlessly whirling world

Hindered by the shadow’s aura,
Paused and saw
And feel…
And fall…
In the motion of waves

We follow
Closed my eyes deeper
Breathlessly shown
Endlessly shatter.
The shadow have captured me

Cuffed me to eternal bliss
Left me in the prison
Of our identity.
Background Music: "To Be" by the Cranes
[Note:] the last line that drifts with the sound:

---- light of my life, fire of my dreams. My sin, my soul, my Plato.

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