photo friday: dead of night
Night Light
night light
i beam
i stare
as i move about
one step
from yet another
counting all the pines
counting all the signs
in an aviery of shadows
a burst of stars
the crash of waves
the fading sun
a warrior going down
now all spirits take flight
and wander through the night
night lights
i hover
i spare
a second gone with you
the silk of your blanket
i wrap me with stars
as the wind flew about
another moondust
another dawn's dusk
through rooftops
i look down
and how your brilliance
shine
above everything else...
above everything.
atomicvelvetsigh © 04.21.05
atomicvelvetsigh consumed the twilight @ 3:54 AM
13 Park your thoughts here:
dead of night.. i am but a face among the crowd.. looking back to the past..
and how My brilliance
shine
above everything else...
above everything.
*O rising moon! O Lady moon!
*.*
i love this one Honey! LIP
Love the blurry lights and how they hover towards the top. As always, great accompanying prose.
Ohhh how wonderful! Your work is always outstanding and your poems as well. You have such a way with words! *HUGS*
You have painted my own hearts thoughts... what a powerful writer you are! Keep up and remember that in our darkest hour, the light is really that much closer.
Cheers!
- Jo
*.* ..and you are right..nothing shines when the light is not falling on it
its been a wonderful 3 years.. (and more to come) thank you.. LIP
steve thank you! and oh, if you click through to the flickr page, you'll see something hidden in the photo.
angela.. thats so sweet of you to say.. i wrote this poem years abck and took this shot last year.. its just a good combination now with this week's topic on photot friday and how i feel.
jo.. nice of you to drop by. thank you for that lovely thought as well.. and yeah, the light is what keeps me holding on..
wonderful sense of mood in both words and illustration
especially liked "aviary of shadows"
thank you
yeah this poem was inspired by so many events in my life.. and the image was taken when somebody *.* special.. visited me..
I'm not sure whether to be scared or charmed? Either way, I like!
well im not scary.. hmm.. am i?
};-}
Nice photo, the effect is very well done. Those lines below though well-composed, may as well be left out. The photo can stand on its own...
oh hi dodong! well this is an old post.. ahh. yeah i remember linking this to a comment on sir dennis' blog.. 8)
well you are quite right about the bottom lines.. hmm.. noe come to think of it, i guess its the dashboard of the car.. hehe i was in the backseat of a car when i made this shot. 8)
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