Photo Friday: Sentimental
Lost by the wind's invisibility
consumed by sorrow
in a different plane
to places unknown
constantly in a monotone
yearning for heights again
in the brink of fright
and invulnerability
up in a muzzle
clinched, tied, twisted,
shivering as flown
ablaze by the fume
of the fraudulent illusion
of holding back that thought
while in deep motion
thus losing myself
in the deception of truth
mocking the steadfast redemption;
will I be ruined
as I devotiously cascade
the horizon’s silvertone
or would I just melt away?
stretching frail reason
delusive and vague
as the wind deliberately sweep me
into its absorbing compassion
increasing and increasing
and in abrupt pause I ignite
in the presence of nothing…
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note: updated the perfect image for this entry.. [best viewed large]
i posted this poem last friday and as i was traveling yesterday, i chanced upon this melancholic scenery. so i took my digicam and made the scene permanently available.
it's just so rare to see such beautiful cloud formations, add the leafless tree which resembles how i currently feel..
atomicvelvetsigh consumed the twilight @ 9:07 AM
9 Park your thoughts here:
This is just confusing! What do you really want to say here?
hmm...
it is indeed beautiful
a sense of comfort in desolation
thank you
these are indeed emotions experienced when not in a state of well-being..
The picture is beautiful and terribly lonely, I feel that strongly and I hear it in your poem as well.
Can you imagine a world without wind though? The wind is a lonesome friend, but friend it is. Nomotion, no movement, no sweet gust of that mysterious entity would be unbearable I think.
it's a beautiful scene but lonely indeed.. and i can't imagin living without the wind.. like living without the feeling of floating..
First time I read this post, there was no picture. Now I see you didn't answer my question but added a familiar view. I knew you had that same cloud formation before.
i was really stuck on that sentimental challenge; you did it perfectly
james.. hmm.. you saw that too?! 8) actually coincidence as it is, i took that shot on the same city more than 6 months apart.
ascenderrisesabove.. it was a challenge indeed. lol and i am stuck with IF's topic I Spy.. (i always have the notion for it to look cartoonish) - which i am poor at.
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