Illo Friday: Tranquility
In Silence
i wish i had your heart
i wish i could see what you see
amidst your serenity
i float back in my own dreams
dragged by the slow waves
a movement with no sails
here's to the mountains gone flat
here's to the waterfalls gone dry
here's to the snowstorms gone still
icicle star-crossed eyes
here's to the twisting roads gone nowhere
here's to the journey that ended
to where it all started.
quiet.
empty.
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note: My contribution to this week's Illustration Friday.
Maybe in the following days, i'll do some updates here. I just had a tough week. Almost lost my head there... For now, im just re-arranging my poems at poemhunter. Please click the link if you consider yourself as one...
atomicvelvetsigh consumed the twilight @ 4:30 AM
11 Park your thoughts here:
There is a deep sense of longing which runs through these words. Nice.
this is my favorite piece yet! keep writing. keep longing. keep loving :)
A visually interesting illo, and incredible poetry. Really wonderful!
bleak 'n' beautiful
thank you
feel a bit that way myself
(ok - i'm lying about feeling beautiful)
can't open the new link for some reason
will try again later
eyyy wekam bak;)glad ur bak:)
siyangapala lilipat kami kaya medyo lie low me mag blog ng kunti..how are you na pala?
well...ahhhhh blessings lahat ng pangyayari ituring mo lahat ng pain at hurts na "pataba" para ikaw ay lumago..okay?God bless and more power.
:)sis mo sa blog,
sekwet
.:A:. ..indeed.. a longing for a place and time that may have gone and never come back..
dreaming-neko.. thanks neko. and i wont forget to also keep on dreaming..
araviswaren.. thanks and i believe there is a secret soul in each of us. the missing piece in this picture is the missing soul in me..
floots.. i checked the link, sorry i made a broken url. its working now tho. hope you visit it. and thanks for liking this.
i believe everybody posess their own beauty, its just a matter of how one appreciates it. like how i am now learning to appreciate each tragedy as a beauty in a way that it makes the world a balanced place.
lws.. can i not call you by the name you placed? tssk.. reminds me of someone. anyway, thanks for your kind words.. can't agree less.
btw, ang cute ng bagong blog mo. so green.. gonna read some post now.
I really like the blue fuzzy sway of the trees. Great negative versus positive space and poetry:)
mahilig talaga ako sa green!as in pati gulay,damit..nature ..lahat basta green ;) *kindat* maganda yung illustration friday mo na isang blog hang cute cute paano mo ginawa yun?
yuga.. its up now. 8) hehe thanks for reminding me.
anonymous.. glad you like it! and the empty space do mean a lot too..
l.. first off.. pwede bang "l" nalang? hehe.. well, ang tanging ginagamit ko lang naman kasi wala akong pang digital art ay MSpaint. 8)
'been to your site many times and i can't believe i almost missed this blog. Nice illustration and poetry as always!
thanks isay.. this poem is indeed very special to me as well as the illo...
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